Explain every condition, and write the whole script in our own voice

The instructions only ever covered the weather. They are now four pages:
what you decide, how signs and spoilage work, what the sky does, and
what the street does - the fair and the rival included, with each
condition named and what it does to your day spelled out.

Every passage that was reproduced from the original has been rewritten:
the welcome, the ledger heading, the thunderstorm, the road works, the
heat wave, the bankruptcy line and the cost announcements. A project
released under copyleft has no business licensing words it did not
write, and now it does not have to. NOTICE.md records what changed and
why, and narrows the borrowed material to the town's name and the
ledger's labels - neither of which is a copyright question.

Shortening the ledger heading also fixes the pill that was wrapping to
two lines in the remaster.

Checked in both skins: all four pages fit the tube at full size, with
room to spare.

src/components/BriefingScreen.tsx

@@ -27,16 +27,15 @@ export function BriefingScreen({
       {conditions.heatWave && (
         <>
           <Line />
-          <Line className="warn">A HEAT WAVE IS PREDICTED FOR TODAY!</Line>
-          <Line className="warn">EVERYONE IN TOWN IS THIRSTY.</Line>
+          <Line className="warn">A HEAT WAVE HAS SETTLED OVER THE</Line>
+          <Line className="warn">TOWN. EVERY THROAT IN IT IS DRY.</Line>
         </>
       )}
       {conditions.streetCrew && (
         <>
           <Line />
-          <Line className="warn">THE STREET CREWS ARE WORKING TODAY.</Line>
-          <Line className="warn">THERE WILL BE NO TRAFFIC ON YOUR</Line>
-          <Line className="warn">STREET.</Line>
+          <Line className="warn">THE ROAD IS DUG UP OUTSIDE. NOTHING</Line>
+          <Line className="warn">IS COMING DOWN YOUR STREET TODAY.</Line>
         </>
       )}
       {conditions.festival && (

src/components/IntroScreen.tsx

@@ -1,53 +1,93 @@
 import { useState } from 'react'
 import { Btn, Line } from './Crt'
 
-const PAGES: string[][] = [
-  [
-    'HI! WELCOME TO LEMONSVILLE, CALIFORNIA!',
-    '',
-    'IN THIS SMALL TOWN YOU ARE IN CHARGE OF',
-    'RUNNING YOUR OWN LEMONADE STAND. YOU CAN',
-    'COMPETE WITH AS MANY OTHER PEOPLE AS YOU',
-    'WISH, BUT HOW MUCH PROFIT YOU MAKE IS UP',
-    'TO YOU. IF YOU MAKE THE MOST MONEY,',
-    "YOU'RE THE WINNER!",
-    '',
-    'TO MAKE LEMONADE YOU WILL NEED LEMONS,',
-    'SUGAR, ICE AND PAPER CUPS. THE COST OF A',
-    'GLASS STARTS AT 2 CENTS AND CLIMBS AS',
-    'THE SUMMER WEARS ON.',
-  ],
-  [
-    'EACH DAY YOU DECIDE THREE THINGS:',
-    '',
-    '  1. HOW MANY GLASSES TO MAKE',
-    '  2. HOW MANY SIGNS TO PUT UP',
-    '     (15 CENTS EACH)',
-    '  3. WHAT TO CHARGE PER GLASS',
-    '',
-    'SIGNS BRING CUSTOMERS, BUT THE FOURTH',
-    'SIGN HELPS A LOT LESS THAN THE FIRST.',
-    '',
-    'WATCH THE WEATHER. A HOT DAY IS WORTH',
-    'MORE GLASSES AND A HIGHER PRICE. A',
-    'CLOUDY DAY MIGHT TURN INTO A STORM AND',
-    'RUIN EVERY GLASS YOU MADE.',
-    '',
-    'YOU START WITH $2.00. GOOD LUCK!',
-  ],
+/** A paragraph, optionally led by the name of the thing it describes. */
+interface Entry {
+  term?: string
+  text: string
+}
+
+interface Page {
+  title: string
+  entries: Entry[]
+}
+
+const PAGES: Page[] = [
+  {
+    title: 'WELCOME TO LEMONSVILLE',
+    entries: [
+      {
+        text: 'YOU HAVE A CARD TABLE, A PITCHER AND A CORNER OF THE STREET. WHAT YOU MAKE OF THEM IS ENTIRELY YOUR OWN AFFAIR.',
+      },
+      {
+        text: 'LEMONS, SUGAR, ICE AND CUPS ALL COST MONEY. A GLASS STARTS AT 2 CENTS TO MAKE AND GETS DEARER AS THE SUMMER WEARS ON.',
+      },
+      { text: 'YOU OPEN WITH $2.00 IN THE TIN. WHOEVER ENDS THE SUMMER RICHEST WINS.' },
+    ],
+  },
+  {
+    title: 'WHAT YOU DECIDE',
+    entries: [
+      { text: 'EACH MORNING YOU SET THREE THINGS:' },
+      { term: 'GLASSES', text: 'HOW MANY TO MAKE TODAY.' },
+      { term: 'SIGNS', text: 'HOW MANY TO PUT UP, AT 15 CENTS EACH. THE FOURTH SIGN HELPS A LOT LESS THAN THE FIRST.' },
+      { term: 'PRICE', text: 'WHAT TO CHARGE A GLASS. ASK TOO MUCH AND NOBODY STOPS.' },
+      {
+        text: 'EVERY GLASS IS MADE FRESH. WHAT YOU DO NOT SELL IS POURED AWAY, SO MAKE WHAT THE DAY WILL ACTUALLY TAKE.',
+      },
+    ],
+  },
+  {
+    title: 'READ THE SKY',
+    entries: [
+      { term: 'SUNNY', text: 'STEADY TRADE AND NO SURPRISES.' },
+      { term: 'HOT AND DRY', text: 'A BIGGER CROWD, AND THEY WILL PAY MORE FOR A COLD GLASS. A HEAT WAVE IS BETTER STILL.' },
+      {
+        term: 'CLOUDY',
+        text: 'FEWER BUYERS ABOUT, AND THE DAY MAY TURN INTO A THUNDERSTORM THAT RUINS EVERY GLASS YOU MADE.',
+      },
+      { text: 'THE FORECAST COMES BEFORE YOU BUY. THE STORM DOES NOT.' },
+    ],
+  },
+  {
+    title: 'READ THE STREET TOO',
+    entries: [
+      {
+        term: 'STREET CREWS',
+        text: 'THE ROAD IS DUG UP AND THE TRAFFIC GOES WITH IT. THEY OFTEN STAY A SECOND DAY.',
+      },
+      {
+        term: 'SUMMER FAIR',
+        text: 'HALF THE TOWN COMES PAST YOUR STAND, AND THEY ARE OUT TO SPEND.',
+      },
+      {
+        term: 'RIVAL STAND',
+        text: 'SOMEBODY SETS UP ON THE NEXT CORNER AND TAKES A SHARE OF THE STREET UNTIL THEY MOVE ON.',
+      },
+      { text: 'ALL OF IT IS ANNOUNCED BEFORE YOU COMMIT. GOOD LUCK!' },
+    ],
+  },
 ]
 
 export function IntroScreen({ onDone }: { onDone: () => void }) {
   const [page, setPage] = useState(0)
   const last = page === PAGES.length - 1
+  const { title, entries } = PAGES[page]
 
   return (
     <div className="stack">
       <Line className="center inv-line">HOW TO RUN A LEMONADE STAND</Line>
       <Line />
-      {PAGES[page].map((t, i) => (
-        <Line key={i}>{t}</Line>
+      <Line className="center accent">{title}</Line>
+      <Line />
+
+      {entries.map((e, i) => (
+        <p className="intro-entry" key={i}>
+          {e.term && <span className="intro-term">{e.term}</span>}
+          {e.text}
+        </p>
       ))}
+
       <Line />
       <div className="row center">
         {page > 0 && <Btn onClick={() => setPage(page - 1)}>BACK</Btn>}
@@ -55,7 +95,7 @@ export function IntroScreen({ onDone }: { onDone: () => void }) {
           {last ? 'START' : 'MORE'}
         </Btn>
         <Line className="dim">
-          PAGE {page + 1} OF {PAGES.length}
+          {page + 1} OF {PAGES.length}
         </Line>
       </div>
     </div>

src/components/ReportScreen.tsx

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ export function ReportScreen({
 
   return (
     <div className="stack">
-      <Line className="center inv-line">$$ LEMONSVILLE DAILY FINANCIAL REPORT $$</Line>
+      <Line className="center inv-line">$$ THE DAY&apos;S TAKINGS $$</Line>
 
       <Scene
         conditions={conditions}
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@ export function ReportScreen({
       {player.bankrupt && (
         <>
           <Line />
-          <Line className="warn">{player.name}, YOU DO NOT HAVE ENOUGH</Line>
-          <Line className="warn">MONEY LEFT TO STAY IN BUSINESS.</Line>
+          <Line className="warn">{player.name}, THERE IS NOTHING LEFT IN</Line>
+          <Line className="warn">THE TIN. YOUR STAND IS FINISHED.</Line>
         </>
       )}
 

src/components/TradingScreen.tsx

@@ -65,9 +65,9 @@ export function TradingScreen({
       <div className="stack">
         <Line className="center inv-line">DAY {conditions.day} IN LEMONSVILLE</Line>
         <Scene conditions={conditions} traffic={0.2} />
-        <Line className="warn">A THUNDERSTORM HIT LEMONSVILLE EARLIER</Line>
-        <Line className="warn">TODAY, JUST AS THE STANDS WERE BEING</Line>
-        <Line className="warn">SET UP. EVERYTHING WAS RUINED!!</Line>
+        <Line className="warn">THE SKY OPENED OVER THE TOWN THIS</Line>
+        <Line className="warn">MORNING, RIGHT AS THE STANDS WENT UP.</Line>
+        <Line className="warn">NOT ONE GLASS SURVIVED IT.</Line>
         <Line />
         <div className="row center">
           <Btn kind="primary" onClick={onDone}>